News+Letter

=**Compilers: Si****ngyu, Frank**= =Editor(s): Katherine=

= Criteria - Finished Article = Maximum amount of persons - 123456789987654321 Wanted: Designers and Assistants to contribute into the Making of the Newspaper xD ||
 * **Number** || **Reviewer** || Club/ Activity/ Topic/ thing ||
 * Example || B. Forsyth || has decided to give us 10/10 for educational multimedia
 * 1 || Kevin || Horoscope
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 * D
 * D ||


 * 2 || Tim || The tyranny of cell phones ||
 * 3 || Hussain || Technology in school ||
 * 4 || Birunthaa || Choir ||
 * 5 || Edward || Breakfast club ||
 * 6 || [|SingYu] || Procrastination/Sleep ||
 * 7 || [|Kevin L.] || The arts in Edumacation ||
 * 8 || Alan || Annoying ConcertGoers ||
 * 9 || Amy || Organization - strategies/consequences ||
 * 10 || Julie || BARBIE AND KEN :) ||
 * 11 || Frank || Debate ||
 * 12 || Vivian || How technology is lowering the bar for people in the arts ||
 * 13 || Katherine || This thing about people around the TTC.. Yeah.. ||
 * 14 || Austin (Proposal) || Don Mills Swim Team ||
 * 15 || Johnson || Pokemon ||
 * 16 || Zane ||  ||
 * 17 || Adam || Technology has a place in school ||
 * 18 || Alex || 30 hour famine ||
 * 19 || Allan || Recycling ||
 * 20 || Michael 310 || Overachievers and underachievers in school ||
 * 21 || [|Michael 309] || New&current handheld(size) techs (iPod, Android, ETC) ||

you should make the files .doc instead of .docx it's better that way >-<

-Tim

Here is my article proposal……by Birunthaa....i think Michael (the other one) uploaded his and like, replaced mine...so here it is

-Edward

-Amy

-Julie

The reason that I chose to write an article about debate club is because I am a member of this club and many interesting things happen in this club. The way that I plan to find the information is during the meet that happens every week on Wednesday. I plan to ask some of the members and some of the organizers so I get a better perspective of this club. Personally, I know what this club means to me, but debating is in truth a more formal form of argument and thus is very useful in real life. Debate enables someone to present their arguments in a formal and organized fashion in which logic and reason can be used effectively. During English class we are already practicing doing debates and thus it is recognized that debates make us more educated and more rational. If more people become interested in debate, it helps them become more educated and maybe more contributing members to society. Personally, I have found that debates make people more accepting to reason. I plan to make 10 questions about their experience in debate club and try to find a correlation between how long one debates and how people are more accepting to new ideas. I plan to write my article on the effect of debate on young individuals. -frank

- vivian

I've decided to write my article about the attitude of people around the TTC. The reason is because lately I've noticed various types of people on and from my way from school. I think most people will be able to relate to this because most people have been on the TTC, with many using it often. My sources will be my peers and my own experiences. Throughout my article, I plan to list around 4 or 5 types of people I've seen. It won't be a serious article, so I may sometimes use slang - after all, the readers will be students, not teachers. I think this article will encourage students to think more about their environment.

- Katherine

- Johnson

- Adam Winick

== =**- ALEX wu :D**=

-ALLAN YUan
-Michael(the other one)

Follow the table. Create links to your documents from "draft" so it doesn't get all cluttered. Highlight anything to be edited, don't change it yourself. One more thing, check back often so that people will actually have things edited. Let's try and avoid the mess we made with the first writing assignment. -Tim

Do we have to include the edited doc? -Allan be edited || Edited by || Topic || -frank || Oh my Gorsh. i uploaded the wrong thing...=.= (finished on time, but handed in late)... stupid browsing files.
 * **Number** || **Author** || Documents to
 * 1 || Kevin || [[file:Horoscopes.docx]] || [[file:Horoscopes[1].docx]]

This is the finished one... D:  ||
 * 2 || Tim || [|draft] FIRST=D || Allan[| Edit-1]

Not really an edit, but a comment, personally, if you ended by saying that you just got texted, i feel it would be stronger? -frank || The tyranny of cell phones pls put in newsletter k thx bai. || -Julie -Kevin Lee || Choir || -Kevin Lee || || -not edited
 * 3 || Hussain || [|Technology in school] ||  ||   ||
 * 4 || Birunthaa || [[file:Article about Choir.doc]] || [[file:Article about Choir.doc]]
 * 5 || Edward || [[file:Breakfast.doc]] ||  || Breakfast club ||
 * 6 || SingYu || [[file:Procrastination.doc]] || [[file:Procrastination edited.doc]]
 * 7 || Kevin L. || [|The Arts in Education.doc]

-Edited || [|The Arts in EducationEDIT.doc] -frank -Julie || The arts in Edumacation ||
 * 8 || Alan || [[file:Annoying ConcertGoers..docx]] || I think I'm going to edit this lat0r. OK? OK. Also, I ripped off Katherine. || Annoying Concert People. ||
 * 9 || Amy || [[file:Organization.doc]]

Edited Copy:

Final final copy :D || [|Organization edit.doc] -Tim

-Birunthaa -Julie || Organization - strategies/consequences ||
 * 10 || Julie || [[file:Barbie and Ken, Together Again.doc]]

Sorry! The other one was a previous draft so can someone please re-edit? Edited Copy: || -M33k :)

Just a comment on this one, the writing style was really well done, in sort of a biographical format. Not much to change. -SingYu || BARBIE AND KEN :) || new version... please edit? || Old Version Edits
 * 11 || Frank || [[file:Debate.doc]]

[|Debate edit.doc] -Tim @Tim, yeah i fully agree with the cocky thing but i just couldn't think of a more appropriate ending... -Julie

(I think "overjoyed" it pushing it a bit. Change it to "I'm glad you've...."") -SingYu || Debate

 OMGLOL I HANDED IT IN...

Where is everyone?? || .doc version (converted, heard it might mess up formatting though): || Above is from Judy :o || Types of People We All Encounter on the TTC ||
 * 12 || Vivian || draft ||  || How technology is lowering the bar for people in the arts ||
 * 13 || Katherine || .odt version (don't have Word):
 * 14 || Austin || draft || [[file:Austin__News Article.docx]]

Edited By Johnson and Edward. I can give you the hard copy of the edited draft. || Athletics in DMCI || [|Pokemon Final Copy] - Edited version, couldn't find anywhere else to put this so here || Pokemon || || -frank, some grammatical errors, otherwise rather heart-warming -Meekcow || 30 hour famine || new draft edit this || (I just fixed some grammatical mistakes and a couple phrases, but otherwise, well done.) -SingYu
 * 15 || Johnson || [|Pokemon] || [|Pokemon] - Edited by: Leon, Alex
 * 16 || Zane || draft ||  ||   ||
 * 17 || Adam || draft ||  || Technology has a place in school ||
 * 18 || Alex || 30 hour famine
 * 19 || Allan || older draft

Edit or else ** your a hater! your a hater... such a hater haters Everyone is such a meaner so you must edit it all of you ** :C creeper || Recycling

Note to "Compilers: __**Alex, Singyu, Frank**__ and Julie **:C** + Alan. (Li.) " if no new article is posted by 12:00 night, use this one ||
 * 20 || Michael 310 || [[file:OverUnderachievers.doc]]

(edit this if you want) || -both edited by allan || Overachievers and underachievers in school || -editted || -edited by Amy I think the artical if nicely laid out but i don't think it's giving enough information, it' basically talking about the same point the whole artical through. I think it's actually quite short, although it fills the page, it's half taken up by a picture. Just a opinion. || New&current handheld(size) techs (iPod, Android, ETC) ||
 * 21 || Michael 309 || [[file:Handheld Technology english NEWSLETTER.docx]][[file:Handheld_Technology_english_NEWSLETTER.doc]]